Paint A Desert Shifting Timeless Portrait Comments

A refined poetic imagination, Terence. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

The desert, the desert the stacking sand beads, the crystal grains We might lost as we try to trace the footprint As the wind from north to south, east to west erase the path...like time erase some moment of past from present painting a desert shifting timeless portrait we are travelers in the sea of familiar scene yet unfamiliar reality Till oasis grow the tree the fate will start to tell thee..

shadows shape shade past lives shadows whisper sand sings whisper wind grain sands sparkle dark sky sea desert stars..... great imagination dear poet.......... thank yu and congratulations for this poem. tony