Tuesday, August 12, 2014

Pains We Shared! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clouds of pain we shared
Each drops of rain tickled
went flowing along with our tears.
In the darkness of midnight,
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Dinesan Madathil 20 August 2014

A mountain looks amazing while climbing and the mind triumphs at the final conquest. As your moving friend has moved away, remember this separation may intensify your bond of love. Again the mountain one has climbed once, will ever remain as a marvel for a long cherishable experience!

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Amitava Sur 15 August 2014

A very poignant poem with high emotions, and appreciating each other with respect and regards.with a hope of better tomorrow. We hid our tears, swinging in the garden, Hoping for early bright sunrise. ...... loved it Geetha.

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Neela Nath Das 15 August 2014

A woman with great Will power.Loved reading this, Geetha.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 August 2014

Earth is round For we may meet somewhere Earth makes it happen and wish gets fulfilled. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2014

You compromised somewhere in life.. beautiful line...10 not realized its impact still reflected in act very treachery concept as human with deliberate intent

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Salini Nair 14 August 2014

parallel our pains were but like two sides of coin One hidden in dark, while other came to light.....................................beautiful write..separation hurts...but there is a hope that as earth is round we all meet again................

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Valsa George 13 August 2014

Though separated by distance, still held so close! A poignant expression of the pain felt on being cast on opposite shores! Very touchingly put in!

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Akhtar Jawad 13 August 2014

Picture of a selfless love for a friend, nicely painted.An Urdu poet says-Rnang baten karen aur baton se khushboo aaye-When colors start talking and sweet fragrance I feel, it means I am reading a poem by Geetha.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 August 2014

loveliest expression of fondness and heartache.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 12 August 2014

Very touching.....emotions overflowing with every line delicately penned.......Geetha.........very well composed

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