His entire life was in his pocket
Starting from his daughters hair locket.
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Nice poem. I liked it. It was written well with great texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal
You are unskilled. C'mo man.Your awkward rhymes, your thin vocabulary. Get with it. All this could be overlooked if you were spending yourself on your work. Clearly you are not.