Sunday, June 26, 2011

Pains Of Divorce Comments

Rating: 5.0

His entire life was in his pocket
Starting from his daughters hair locket.
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James Cecil 05 January 2013

You are unskilled. C'mo man.Your awkward rhymes, your thin vocabulary. Get with it. All this could be overlooked if you were spending yourself on your work. Clearly you are not.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Nice poem. I liked it. It was written well with great texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Best regards Akmal

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