Thursday, October 9, 2014

Painfully Yours. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Well, You and your thoughts
Make my inner- waves flow off
Unto some abyss of silence absolute
And chillness horrendous.
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Tajudeen Shah
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Akhtar Jawad 19 October 2014

When pains are converted in a beautiful poem like this every heart starts feeling pain of the poet without knowing what actually the pain is.....10.

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Tajudeen Shah 18 October 2014

dear blessed poets, who have generously supported me with wonderful and sensible reviews, please accept my purest expression of gratitude at this instance. God bless. Rgds and so much love.

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Soulful Heart 18 October 2014

the metaphors and similies u have used are amazing.......straight from heart..................yes some memories cannot wioe out........they linger like reluctant snow on the roof...........wonderful write

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Geetha Jayakumar 16 October 2014

Beautiful poem. Beautiful lines.... Oh, soul blessed, Dive not unto its dark depth....But it happens..... Concluding lines are fantastic... From the aging branch of life Do wisdom drops off. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 October 2014

Beautiful poem with nice selection of words / From the aging branch of life Do wisdom drops off...like innocent child thank u

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Valsa George 09 October 2014

Caught in the clutch of some indefinable pain that strangles and strangulates! A chaotic mental state is exposed in its fearful, depressing intensity through powerful words! The concluding couplet is simplly great!

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