Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Painfull Suffering Comments

Rating: 3.9

Dagger of pain,
kepper of souls,
why must it rain,
why have goals,
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Devils Favorite Child Blade
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The Devils Girl 21 February 2012

I love this poem so much

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The Devils Girl 08 February 2012

ALL I HAVE TO SAY IS I LOVE IT AND THAT SUMS IT UP: D

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Devils Favorite Child Blade 13 December 2011

thank you all for these kind words and the last line i had to censor it because the wont let me use duck change the D to Fand and i'd would have written 'duck this with all my might'.

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Crimson Love 28 November 2011

This is a good poem, your emotions were portrayed well, nice job.

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Shadow Girl 22 November 2011

Strong and powerful..good use of words. -SG

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Romeo Della Valle 10 November 2011

Bravo! A very powerful and well penned write that clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World! Keep it up! Thank you for sharing! God Bless You for always! Romeo from New York City....

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Christina Hodges 10 November 2011

Good work and you write some neat poetry KEEP IT UP! ! ! :) :)

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Silentpoet Grl 10 November 2011

Strong emotion in this poem. I like it. Great job!

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 07 November 2011

wow that was amazing so much said in so little bit of worods it was jus tamazing good job

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Pari Dharawat 04 November 2011

I like the whole meaning and the element of the poem and the positive outlook line - i liked to read about might part - which is' fight with all your might', the only thing is that it felt a bit out of sync. you write nice the thought is real good too. keep writing.

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Dave Walker 02 November 2011

A great poem really liked it. A great write.

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