Sunday, April 13, 2014

Painful Goodbye Comments

Rating: 4.3

Tears form in my heart
Silent roll down my cheek
Stopping gently on the lips
That will never know your kiss
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Brittney Miller
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Chifuniro Mgunda 06 May 2020

nice piece love the emotion captured within the flow

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Chifuniro Mgunda 19 October 2018

Beautifully done...love the emotion within

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Benjamin Uy 07 September 2018

A good poem about goodbyes and burying the past A sad poem and first rate

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Chinedu Dike 21 September 2014

You captured the intimacy, the pain, during and after saying goodbye. An insightful and beautifully penned piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.10 marks for you.

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Ambitious Blessing 22 April 2014

I almost cried it's so painful ...keep it up

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Shania K. Younce 17 April 2014

This is well written poem. Bien!

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Unwritten Soul 14 April 2014

You play with words very well, keep on writing and be stronger too_Soul

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Patricia Grantham 14 April 2014

A painful but very passionate write. Feeling the pain of an unpleasant goodbye. Very heartfelt.

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C. P. Sharma 13 April 2014

Deep agony of parting and a sense of repentance is ruefully reflected in this poem. I love it.

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Mohammad Skati 13 April 2014

I loved your poems, so I translated THE PAINFUL GOODBYE and I LOVE YOU THROUGH THE DARK. You are a great poetess. Bravo. Thanks.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 13 April 2014

Beautiful description of painful feeling of regret.

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Yash Shinde 13 April 2014

.......a deep soulful write, sometimes love is hidden deep inside our heart, but we are afraid of unleash the truth............the pain and anxiety, then slowly eats us from inside...............lovely write

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 April 2014

I said goodbye when I didn't mean it Love's deep secret beautifully expressed in the poem.

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V P Mahur 13 April 2014

Dear Brittney, The poem reveals the sorrowful feels of love in an impressive way. Your heart is so soft to feel the gloom of love so deeply. I can understand. Thanks!

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