Tears form in my heart
Silent roll down my cheek
Stopping gently on the lips
That will never know your kiss
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A good poem about goodbyes and burying the past A sad poem and first rate
You captured the intimacy, the pain, during and after saying goodbye. An insightful and beautifully penned piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing.10 marks for you.
You play with words very well, keep on writing and be stronger too_Soul
A painful but very passionate write. Feeling the pain of an unpleasant goodbye. Very heartfelt.
Deep agony of parting and a sense of repentance is ruefully reflected in this poem. I love it.
I loved your poems, so I translated THE PAINFUL GOODBYE and I LOVE YOU THROUGH THE DARK. You are a great poetess. Bravo. Thanks.
.......a deep soulful write, sometimes love is hidden deep inside our heart, but we are afraid of unleash the truth............the pain and anxiety, then slowly eats us from inside...............lovely write
I said goodbye when I didn't mean it Love's deep secret beautifully expressed in the poem.
Dear Brittney, The poem reveals the sorrowful feels of love in an impressive way. Your heart is so soft to feel the gloom of love so deeply. I can understand. Thanks!
nice piece love the emotion captured within the flow