Tuesday, October 23, 2012

Painful Effect Of Your Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

Thoughts of daydream, Swear of love,
With you, wrecked heart like sharp thorn,
And mesmerizing reminiscence of that strolling
Made heart like quarry and impell it to moun.
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Indrajeet Mishra
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Chinedu Dike 12 November 2014

A well articulated piece on the distress felt in bliss of love, nicely captured to drive home the essence of the piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Ashmiya Thalvan 08 November 2012

awesome! ! ! ! poetic mind u havv go oon.........

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 November 2012

A very nice piece of work. Keep it up and, thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

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Kishor Sharma 08 November 2012

splendid piece of poetry. keep it up..

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 06 November 2012

A cry of love over love lost or love rejected. A very nice way of painting the emotions created by the vacuum of the loss. Touching and moving! Thanks for sharing this.

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Unwritten Soul 05 November 2012

How come this sweet poem can make pain felt so much inside the write....a write...it means you did a very nice job and play with handful creative words to pull all emotion out from chest, well done_Soul

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Akanksha Bhatt 05 November 2012

aww... i felt that its really a very touching poem fully emerged in your emotions...i liked it very much..thanks for the invitation. :)

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