Saturday, July 7, 2018

Painful Desire Comments

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Should there be tears in my eyes
For you to see that I am in pain
And I do everything not because I have
Something to gain, but I haven't been
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brendon khore
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Dr Antony Theodore 07 July 2018

The sky is blue and my love is true You don't have a clue how I desire to Cross the line you drew..beautiful poem describing love and desire and wishes. the pain when unrequited.. a very fine poem full of expression. tony

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