Painful Byes Comments

well writin poem, with strong bond n its really painful byes

Dark much? but soo beautiful and so sad. I could learn a few things from you. :) The way you weave those words to form such a masterpiece, incredible.

I can almost feel your loss. Be strong. as long as you write it should help.

thats really painful... i get a feeling that u lost something important to u. i hope i am wrong..

What, is it the vibrations of the surrounding that pulls you down or are you missing home? Regardless of the reasons behind, you created a beauty here. :) Seems you don't mind the score either, so a tenner si here!

coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool! it is my friendly attempt.