Monday, January 16, 2012
Pain You Won'T Own Comments
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Pain you won't own,
Owns you, in the end;
The dark water comes
And you forgot how to swim.
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Patti Masterman
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Eric Cockrell
16 January 2012
very good, strong ending stanza.... forgiveness we dont give, doesnt allow us to be forgiven, love we dont give, becomes the casket, and the cold stone!
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8/11/2025 8:17:49 AM # 1.0.0
beautiful and strong write...loved it -SG