Tuesday, February 28, 2006

Pain Within Comments

Rating: 4.5

There is a pain within this heart,
My pain within my sadness through my eyes,
My eyes are like a burden that you can see right through me,
No pain I ever felt was that one single broken heart that had been left behind and never got a chance to be healed,
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Jennifer Cook
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Rajudora 07 October 2018

Great poeam

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Brenda breunig 12 May 2018

Healing

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Hannah Williams 05 May 2018

great poem, i felt bthe pain as i read it.

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Rey G. Navarro 13 February 2018

Only the person with this kind of pain can express what Jennifer feels inside her. No one else can understand her as it is something unique to her.

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Jt 02 August 2021

I could relate though. Pain is something everyone wants to heal.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 22 October 2017

A heart touching poetic feelings.I loved every line.Deserves 10+++ Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 October 2017

Sadness through my eyes! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 October 2017

A touching poem that expresses the intensity of pain.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 October 2017

The intensity of suffering caused by the pain is touching. However, time will definitely teach to overcome/live with it. Hearty congrats on poem of the day.

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Lyn Paul 05 October 2017

The pain is also in your words. The thought of it never going away is the heartache. Yet really we know that it is sometimes often short lived. Yet seems unbearable at the time. May your pain now be washed away.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 October 2017

pain within these wall I can hear it say, There is no way out, No way to wash away the pain, The pain I feel. A great write. Pain beyond escape, well described. 10++, Congratulations for POD.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 October 2017

Pain which remains within heart scribbles mind and this makes a person cry. The deep sadness provokes mind. There is no way to become out. Pain you feel is deep and this is difficult to remove. Still we wish you all the best to get recovery from pain reaming in memory of God. A brilliant sad poem is shared here...10..Congratulations! This is wonderful poem selected for the poem of the day.

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Rini Shibu 05 October 2017

There is no way Out No way to wash away the pain... Excellent poem.. Congratulations

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Jeanette Telusma 05 October 2017

A wonderfully expressed write for such a sad poem. Jennifer, congrats for being chosen and also for being a fine poet. Blessings to you always.

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Tom Allport 05 October 2017

a sad poem of true heartache felt during a spell of emotional breakdown? but always remember JR time is a great healer! .................well written

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 October 2017

Such a remarkable write, Jennifer...Congrats for being chosen... a perfect 10++++++

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Akhtar Jawad 05 October 2017

There is way out of this pain but somehow I can’t see it, Great poem, congrats.

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Mountain Man 22 February 2017

An excellente poem by you..

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Brian Ely 06 November 2016

i can totally relate to those words. they spoke to me.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 29 October 2016

Pain is the saddest part of life. We were born in pain. Pain is what we caused to our fellow men and women. Pain brings sadness; it is sad being in pain, although living is being in pain. However, sometimes this pain I benign; we do not feel it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 March 2016

No pain I ever felt was that one single broken heart that had been left behind and never got a chance to be healed Excellent poem. But to say at the end there is no way out..... can lead to more pain and suffering. there is always a way out. thank you very much. tony

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