There is a pain within this heart,
My pain within my sadness through my eyes,
My eyes are like a burden that you can see right through me,
No pain I ever felt was that one single broken heart that had been left behind and never got a chance to be healed,
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Only the person with this kind of pain can express what Jennifer feels inside her. No one else can understand her as it is something unique to her.
A heart touching poetic feelings.I loved every line.Deserves 10+++ Thanks for sharing.
Sadness through my eyes! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A touching poem that expresses the intensity of pain.
The intensity of suffering caused by the pain is touching. However, time will definitely teach to overcome/live with it. Hearty congrats on poem of the day.
The pain is also in your words. The thought of it never going away is the heartache. Yet really we know that it is sometimes often short lived. Yet seems unbearable at the time. May your pain now be washed away.
pain within these wall I can hear it say, There is no way out, No way to wash away the pain, The pain I feel. A great write. Pain beyond escape, well described. 10++, Congratulations for POD.
Pain which remains within heart scribbles mind and this makes a person cry. The deep sadness provokes mind. There is no way to become out. Pain you feel is deep and this is difficult to remove. Still we wish you all the best to get recovery from pain reaming in memory of God. A brilliant sad poem is shared here...10..Congratulations! This is wonderful poem selected for the poem of the day.
There is no way Out No way to wash away the pain... Excellent poem.. Congratulations
A wonderfully expressed write for such a sad poem. Jennifer, congrats for being chosen and also for being a fine poet. Blessings to you always.
a sad poem of true heartache felt during a spell of emotional breakdown? but always remember JR time is a great healer! .................well written
Such a remarkable write, Jennifer...Congrats for being chosen... a perfect 10++++++
There is way out of this pain but somehow I can’t see it, Great poem, congrats.
Pain is the saddest part of life. We were born in pain. Pain is what we caused to our fellow men and women. Pain brings sadness; it is sad being in pain, although living is being in pain. However, sometimes this pain I benign; we do not feel it.
No pain I ever felt was that one single broken heart that had been left behind and never got a chance to be healed Excellent poem. But to say at the end there is no way out..... can lead to more pain and suffering. there is always a way out. thank you very much. tony
Great poeam