Monday, November 27, 2006

Pain Unbearable Comments

Rating: 5.0

Persistent tension
Aggravates situation
Inflicts pain
No restraint
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Zaheed Patel 07 November 2007

HI, a very beautifully written poem though one can't help thinking that these type of words are from the heart born out of an unpleasant experience

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Raghavan Warrier 08 December 2006

Ha another new technique from you. But very well written with a few words.

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Susan Bagley 29 November 2006

Very real life! Loved it! Susan B

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Reuben Matthew 27 November 2006

'Alleviate grief Bring relief Let go Ego'...well said! ! Nice way of getting the idea across. Reuben.

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