Wednesday, July 15, 2009

Pain To Dull The Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

She sits in a small bedroom
On the edge of the bed
Every illuminating light of hope
Has long burned out
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Britney Hogue
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. . 15 July 2009

You've pulled the irony from this beautifully Britney. I enjoyed every word. :)

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~ Jon London ~ 15 July 2009

Oh the emotion that pours down the page with this well expressed piece really does show your talent....well penned 10++ for raw emotion....what I like to see and feel in a poem.....nice work Britney

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Caddoc Bryn 15 July 2009

i liked this alot, very good

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