I believe I see Pain
More than just what makes you cry
For when you are in pain,
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Feeling the agony of others, humanness. Nagging God, being reborn as a gem, the soul attaining a rare peace, sadness as a closest ally spirits reaching high, matter of faith. These are the points i collected from your poem very nice poem, you have thought out a lot dear poetess. thank you for this poem. tony
Sadness is very precious for a poet. It depresses the pains towards subconscious and unconscious which saves the conscious from breakdown and generates a great poetry as a final product. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks
Such a brilliant write, Nayyab... a perfect 10++++