Pain, Scars, Love Comments

Nice poem. This reads like a great country music lyric to me. The third stanza really pulls the piece together. I hope you put this to music!

Simple logical path through this field of thought. If only reality was as easy.

Beautiful poem with all the emotions blended perfectly. Nice one. Keep writing

in this poem you speak of truth, most people do hide they are real shy, you shouldnt be afraid tgo speak the truth and show the real you.4 hiding can only go so far but is it really hiding? i really enjoyed this poem. you may not realize that what you speak of really does inspire people, great job and great work this poem has great a great rythmic flow and rhyme. i give this a ten. :)

The truth is well written. I love this poem. Thank you so much for sharing

I like the truth in these well chosen words. Thanks for sharing this.

Positive thinking is the key to success and happiness and you seem to have it. This is a well penned, poignant and uplifting write! 10+++ Keep it up! You got what it takes to make it through the Poetry's World, talent! Love and Peace for always! ....

Nicely written you should be proud of your work it inspired me, thanks for sharing.

Great poem with a lot of wisdom. Wonderfully written. Great imagery. Fine poetics. A big...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2