Pain Over The Ages. Comments

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Lost love. Hmm.. Nice diction sir. And very simple write. The mood of grief and sorrow is well expressed.

Ecstatic ashes for unborn ages. panic poem like its title suggests, I breathed in pain for ages, totally matchless diction u used.expression is much enhancing ur prevail situation. great job

Adolescence was eaten by worms, Obligations swallowed Youthfulness, Silver hair tips announced Advent of middle age shadows Time wheels round like an eagle and seasons give way to seasons. We age with responsibilities and encumbrances drowning us and all our dreams are doused! A splendid write! A 10 for this great write!