Friday, September 23, 2005
Pain Of Your Betrayal Comments
Rating: ★4.4
Pain strikes through,
A knife inside,
Poking and Prodding,
Cutting and slicing,
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7/29/2025 5:11:59 AM # 1.0.0
first, way too simple. the word choice sucked out loud. there was no personality here, the structure could have benefited from stanza's. it just plain needs to be re-writen. dont keep writing if you're pollute the internet with crap like this and call it poetry. give up.