Working like a dog making the best of what I have come to be,
Seeking the luster of white-collar gold making it easier for me,
Held together only by Green Lawn’s precious souls,
Putting down root in a house that is not a home…
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so many people only look at the cover and never make it to the soul, If a person has a good heart thats all you need to know, I feel like a lot of your heart and soul went into this one, I found it so true, very full of emotions, and heart.
that was a very touching and painful needs and feeling.. Expressed so well.. I listened while so saddened by your lost dear friend..the words truly apologies for i t's paralysis..my poem a thunder's sighing tone is a gift to you...i'm just so sad...
A journey to meet the soulmate. beautifull poem. dramitically told in wonderfull use of words and phrases.love this poem voted10 surya