Friday, December 22, 2006

Pain Of The Night I Remember Comments

Rating: 3.5

Watch as this tear falls into empty space
See it fall into life's nameless place
Can you see the glisten as it catches the light
That sparkle once was happiness that is no longer in sight
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Amy Kerswell
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Joe Hanus 22 December 2006

Superb, my dear. One wonders what he did to you. Your words should provoke someone to get you a years supply of NODOZ. -Joe

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Jim Foulk 22 December 2006

a very lonely poem Amy, one of my daughters is named Amy, so you also have a very lonely name. Your poem pain of the night i remember, is well written, you put all of the words in the right place, keep writing.

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Amy Kerswell

Amy Kerswell

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