Thursday, July 30, 2020

Pain Of Separation Comments

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I know how it feels
To fall apart
From the integral part
I nurtured.
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Varsha M
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 October 2021

Shattered I stand With no one to share The agony I bore Crushing me every hour.....painful utterances! !

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Date & Time: 7/30/2020 7: 47: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 58870503 - Separation-Human Curse Member: Varsha M Comment: Yes a permanent scar on heart which people will say as fate. True Sir.

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 July 2020

Pain of separation More than pain of fire burning Cause this wound lives inside

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Dipak adhya 30 July 2020

Separation itself is a painful thougt.... But one has to face it often.... A beautiful creation... But it hurts... It hurts the readers.. with poetic beauty and aching joy.

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so sad.. human tragedy.. loved but missed too.. good 10 Separation-Human curse Thursday,30th July 2020 Life may not be the same again only to witness anguish and pain there shall be a permanent scar on the heart which people shall call as fate on human's part Dr. Jadia Hasmukh

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Sharad Bhatia 30 July 2020

Such a beautiful and heart touching poem about " separation" . It is very difficult to everyone, Thankyou very much for sharing Rated 10++

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M Asim Nehal 30 July 2020

I believe that pain emerges strong when we are alone with our thoughts. A thoughtful poem.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2020

Another wonderful poem Varsha...The last stanza carries power.....10

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