Saturday, January 24, 2009

Pain Of Pleasure Comments

Rating: 4.8

What's this thought
This pain you've brought
Body torn apart inside
I've done all I can, I've tryed
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Alex Mars
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I need this thought This relief you've brought Pain is lost But at what cost... so much sadness in poem. realistic views and praise worthy too...10 read mine hair n hustele, how are you and cry not with no separate ways...comment

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Patti Masterman 24 January 2009

Nice writing with lots of good imagery.

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