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You got my vote because you showed true feelings, not in a poem's format, but nevertheless, your true feelings came out. Like I said in some of my poems' IN THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS', 'A LOVE'S GAME', 'IF BY ANY CHANCE', please, Rae, keep it up, 'Love is Love by any given name', Love and Peace, Romeo
You did a great job revealing true feelings. Putting emotion on paper and bringing out thoughts is not easy. Nice work. Poetry needs these kinda feelings to attract the reader. This poem is full of sight and honesty. Debbie