Thursday, September 14, 2017

Pain Of Knowing The Truth Comments

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How eager I was to know the truth
and when truth was revealed to me
it brought for me more pains.
I can't let others know what the truth is.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 18 September 2017

Sometimes it is better to be in the dark than know the truth for truth can be often painful! Though the truth has pained you, you are not ready to succumb to pain, but drive it away and face life with hope! This is the right attitude! A great write!

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Hazel Durham 16 September 2017

Outstanding write, death is final but the heart still feels the truth with the pain comes the pleasure, a moving poem of how our life-force lingers on lovingly!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 September 2017

We eager to know the truth but when it is revealed we get pain as it is a human instinct. This has been so nicely inscribed in your poem dear Akhtar sir. Beautiful poem.

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Khalida Bano Ali 14 September 2017

A great aftermath of life.......................................

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