Pain Of Heart Comments

SIMPLY awesome.....! ! ! Highly innovative.....10on 10...B-)

thanks a lot Sagar......... :))

Really nice poem. You express your feelings very well. Little bit complicated it looks. Your writing style is so nice. keep it up....

Hey! ....thanks a ton Romeo....your comments really appreciated me a lot...n literally I need such a support.... :)

thanks Deep and Megs.... :))))) thanks alot for reading

amazing Ahana! ! you really write well..! :)

nice flow of emotions :) keep writing :)

thanks Dave...thanks for reading.. :)

A bit of a confusing poem to be honest but full of expressive words which give it a decent flow.

A Great poem, a good choice of words. A great write.

thanks Okoye and Olivia for comments.... :)

nice poem...though a bit complex (for me) I can see the allitrations, good flow of words.. Keep it up..kudos

your poem is amazing and you are obviously very talented