Pain Of Growing Up Comments

Childhood is the best time in one's life. As we grow up, we meet challenges. Some we can overcome, some we cannot. This is life. The poem has good rhyme, good flow of words. I would not like to call the challenges of growing up as 'pain', though.

Yes, Ma'am. Growing up is tough. Its a big struggle where one learns oneself and yearns one's respect. It gets tougher when we find it difficult to identify a friend or a foe. As a write it is extremely good, subtle use of words, and very good rhyming. Really conveys the emotions too..Wonderful Ma'am!

A good poem. Well done!

True, we have to face lot of challenges when we are grown up.

An apt right when we all step into the field of struggle...but hope persists and life goes on... Good write.