Pain Of Flowing With The Dirt Comments

The way you have nature into your poem is wonderful.

concern for nature and life a good comparison between the two

good one..................

The poem speaks well of the pain of flowing with the dirt from the beginning to the end.

i read it in the philosophical connotation also; like rain can be correlated to the divine grace to wash the dirt of the corrupted heart...great poem Vidya

The third verse was a problem but the poem was beautiful and inspirational enough to overcome it. Overall, nicely done. Greenwolfe 1962

A totaly Visual Poem. I also write alot about Mother Nature and her ways. Thanks Tracker