Saturday, June 12, 2010

Pain & Lightning Are The Same Comments

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Pain is like heat lightning.
Just like a flash of white over the treetops,
on the faraway horizon.
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Skye Figueroa
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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 16 June 2010

I like, especially the last line and good use of imagery. We have different views on our associations with lighting and thunderstorms though i.e. in my poem 'Hurricane Darrin'

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Jean Dament 12 June 2010

I liked how you used the comparison of lightening with pain: as you described it so well in your poem. Spiritsong

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