Pain In His Heart........ Comments

Um it was great just the spelling anoyyed me a bit

This is a wonderful poem that made me think.It was very sad and you expressed yourself so well Ashish! Oh and great rhyme scheme and it fit the mood of the poem perfectly! Thanx so much for sharing.... Take care of U =Shelley=

It's a sad poem, but very well worded! Preets

I really like this poem it really makes you think...good job XXchelsiXX

Beautiful insight here Ashish......... thank you for your expressive words to tell a real story. That's a part of the growth of life. Colleen.

Simply mind blowing. Its your true love that matters. Love doesn't need to be reciprocated always. Amrita

A wonderful poem of love ans sorrow... well done

short yet full of power! keep it up Ashish! =)