Pain Has A Face Comments

a nice one and i am surely rating it 9

Great poem on this perpetual trouble called 'pain'...loved its for its crispness and simplicity! Preets

I agree with Siona, this one is simple and to the point. It doesn't need anything else. Love, Fran xx

I like your poem, 'Pain Has A Face, ' very much. The subject is raw to so many people who encounter, and live with, pain. Your poem has nice rhythm, flow, emotion, and yet simplicity. Some poems are dressed up with too many adjectives and descriptions that they lose their integrity. Your poem has integrity. Thank you for allowing other members to see it!