Saturday, November 7, 2009

Pain...Called Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I come to you in mock peace.
I come to you with a plain but filthy heart, filled with deceit and not of truth.
I hope you see me as i am.
With no hurt or pun intended.
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Chiamaka Okorie
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Chiamaka Okorie 07 November 2009

thank you so much...happy you loved it.

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Deborah Cromer 07 November 2009

Open and free, laying it all out in truth. Honest and hopeful. Great job using feelings that some keep hidden. This poem brings out the reality of what builds and what disguises in relationships. Strong and creative, nice work. Debbie

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Nooruddeen Mm 07 November 2009

Hi Chiamaka Have you got the golden key Good work Thanks Pls. go thru my 'Smudge of Blood' if time permits. Rgds Nooruddeen

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