Friday, June 26, 2015

Pain And Pleasures Of Loneliness Comments

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In some moments of loneliness,
Our soul unfolds like rose petals
And spreads fragrance all around.
In some moments of loneliness,
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Khairul Ahsan
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Michael Cochrane 26 June 2022

A wonderful poem well written.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 June 2022

Thank you, dear poet, for reading an old poem of mine and appreciating it.

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Valsa George 21 April 2018

But the pain we feel when we realize that there is nobody to care for us and we are left lonely in life is so severe and also very depressing! You have beautifully brought in the dichotomy of pain here! A 10

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Khairul Ahsan 09 May 2020

'You have beautifully brought in the dichotomy of pain here! ' - Thanks for this kind appreciation, Valsa. Much inspired.

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Valsa George 21 April 2018

Loneliness has its painful as well as happy side! Amid a madding crowd, how we long to be lonely.....! Once when we are back to our own attic where we can shed all formalities and be ourselves, what a relief we feel. One enjoys peace of mind and happiness then! It will also give us the opportunity to do things of our choice without external intervention!

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Khairul Ahsan 09 May 2020

Thanks for your elaborate comment on my poem, Valsa George. Much appreciate your thoughtful words.

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Roseann Shawiak 21 July 2015

Khairul, totally identify with this poem, wanting to be alone to write without interruption, a choice that is made. Yet, being alone because others do not want to stay with you brings only the pain of loneliness. It is an anomaly to be sure. Thank you for sharing through a very telling poem. RoseAnn

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Khairul Ahsan 08 May 2020

Thanks for your reading and the inspiring comment you left here, @Roseann Shawiak.

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Terrance Tracy 27 June 2015

Khairul I can fully appreciate the dichotomy represented in your poem. One chooses to live in solitude when composing words for a novel or poetry, however the choice is a bittersweet pill to swallow. Terrance Tracy

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Khairul Ahsan 08 May 2020

Thank you, @Terrance Tracy, for your thoughtful comment on my poem. I've just read and commented on your poem- 'You Are-What You Think You Are'. A nice poem! How have you been doing these days, dear poet? We haven't exchanged any communication through poetry on this site, for a pretty long time!

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