Pain And Pleasure Comments

mere states/Of undisciplined mind? great piece

Very well written, your ability to draw the reader in with such a short write is of brilliance...well done best wishes Jon

Very good insight on something which can be debated for ages.... Please write more.. looking forward to it.

explicit character...............

Your poem elicits deep thought... it cannot be dismissed. Thank You.

Impressive poem 4 sure! ! !

Probing into the meaning of existence