Pain And Pleasure Comments

With, love they were going in steady movement. They were marching ahead putting hand in hand with caring nature. Smile was brought up with expression and observation. Pushing and pulling of painful watching scribbled mind. Something happened because of hunger and something due to pain and witnessing death. This poem provoked thought. Amazing poem is shared with wisely penned view.10

Had they been humans, They would have been hand-in-hand… //.... A very sad and tragic scene involving a car running over a dog. This makes an extremely poignant and emotional reading experience. But do we care?

A well texted and nicely thought-out poem. Great work! Very realistic description with a tinge of philosophy. Thanks for sharing.