Tuesday, May 8, 2018

Pain Comments

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The pain is what I feel when I see you.
When I look at your face I just want to slap you.

That's how much pain you made me feel.
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Lely Atempa
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The Truth 21 June 2018

I luv beuing on this site i can go mad. She plays at poems no giud see that u are judy Blatherwick

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Time To Go 21 June 2018

Old duck u need a f..uc..k

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 May 2018

I'm the hunter and you're My prey I want to see you cry for your old family. Because we don't need you anymore.......dont u hear me screaming....... pain, sadness, suffering, being alone, rejection........ thank u dear poetess. so many suffer this..... thankyou for giving went to your feelings through a poem and you reflect the experience of many. tony

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Kathy Light 08 May 2018

thank you guys for your love and support, if you have any of your poems you want me read i will gladly do so.

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Oratile Diratsagae 08 May 2018

I love your word play. God bless

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Kathy Light 08 May 2018

Thank you for your love and support if you want me to read any of your poems please let me know and i will gladly do so.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 May 2018

Love and pain! ! Heartbreak! But hope still lies ahead. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kathy Light 08 May 2018

Thanks if you have any of your poems to share i will gladly read them.

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