Saturday, April 14, 2018

Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am born with the pain,
As cloud is born with the rain,
Pain is a cannibal leopard,
Hunting kid of happiness in desert,
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Unnikrishnan E S 14 April 2018

Hi Shelly, The agony of living a painful life well brought out. Congrats.

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Rajnish Manga 14 April 2018

Sweetly rhymed and touching. The pain leaves a lasting trail of festering torture. Truly a masterpiece. It goes into MyPoemList.

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