Saturday, June 28, 2014

Pain Comments

Rating: 4.5

I wish I might
I wish I may
I simply wish
My pain away
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Jack Abdallah
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Howard Savage 12 January 2016

Great poem about desires to be without pain nd to be free.

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* Sunprincess * 28 June 2014

...................I wish we lived in a world without pain and sorrow....and pain is definitely the perfect title for this write which flows very well.....enjoyed...

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Gajanan Mishra 28 June 2014

good writing, thanks, I like it., please read my poems and comment,

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Jack Abdallah

Jack Abdallah

Parma, Ohio
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