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so heartfelt thanks for sharing 10

A good write Adam, but I feel at your age you shouldn't be writing such morbid tales. Look at other things in life, everyday occurrences which can be humourous or more solemn, Nature for instance has a boundless amount of interesting things to write about. Too much sadness can put people off, if they have to continually read about it. As I said before, you have great potential, so widen your horizons a bit more. Love Ernestine XXX