Monday, December 3, 2012

Pain Comments

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Mixer and the liquer here to wash away the pain.
but it never goes away, its like a permanant stain, and i gotta lot to lose but a goota lot to gain. opportunity approachin ima knock it out the frame.
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alicia tschantre
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Connor Whyte 04 December 2012

This sounds like it could have a beat to it very angry and truthful cause most people do have a lot to lose and have a lot to gain but I would rather not lose anything that I already have because it means the most. Very good poem short as well but easy to understand.

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