Friday, October 12, 2012

Pain Comments

Rating: 4.8

Some weak moment when I come to realise
All imaginations and castles of love on hopes
That someday somewhere you would meet
At some strange place, All are false
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Shivani Agarwal
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Rigzin Namgyal 17 November 2012

i give you 10 on 10

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Rigzin Namgyal 17 November 2012

Then cries of pain haunt till dawn The flickering candle too is tired and ushers me to go to sleep But I wonder and I fail to believe My profound cries and love serene Never breaks your comfort and sleep Wow! ! ! ..i really loved this part...it was amazing...please keep writing.. ..i would like to read more of your poems..

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Asif Andalib 18 October 2012

Lovely write. Keep it up

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