Pain Comments

i agree with romeo. your poem is a great write. you show a lot of promise. take a look at my poem called dreams of a child. that was nearly 30 years ago, so things do get better. i'm as happy as can be now, with a beautiful family. so you keep writing my friend and see what life brings.

Shawn, where you are right now, I was many times in my past but I found the Inner Strength to move on, by burying my past forever and taking a new path toward a new horizon, only carrying a bag containing two basic things badly needed: Faith and Hope! In our lives we all go through similar situations but with manage to grow up and move on! This is sad and painful write that clearly shows your potential in the Poetry World! 10+++ Keep inspiring all of us with more of your poignant writes, Champ! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...