Sunday, June 30, 2013

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Today,
I am alone
Beneath the sky
There is no one
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Vishal Sharma
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Heather Wilkins 01 July 2013

lovely poem. you are a nice talent.

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Shahzia Batool 30 June 2013

EPIC! ! ! - - - - - - - We are living in an era of transitions and transformation, a kind of a complete metamorphosis of our being if we take the roots into consideration...the concept of tragedy was grand when it was the thing of kings and princes, now the tragedy is the matter of a common man, similarly, Epic with the greeks and romans was a mighty poem with mighty language and style and characters, now if everyman is an odysseus, common life has become an Odyssey, these lil happenings as you expressed and described are rendering your life as your personal epic...can we call it a transformation of the tradition? or a mere anti-climactic freak of pen? anyways it's a good effort! ! !

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