Pain Comments

I love the rawness in this piece, Every line is drawn from a breath of a pain you feel inside you infused in ink! Bravo!

i liked the way you personify pain on the platter of experieces bitter of a love relation you portrait in this piece...good imagination...good work...10

i love how u include all ur senses when u write! ! n this one i likes ALOT

it's really nice poem.. and your another poems nice to.. but i like this one cuz it's (pain) :)

for me, aside from ur 'the cherry blossom tree', i also really really like this one among ur poems in ur collection sail on, x