Pain Comments

Very emotional, and well written. Every word describes the pain you have gone through. Keep up the writing! -Jessica

TEARS DROPPING ON THESE VERSES SOUND LIKE RAIN HITTING WINDOWPANE ONLY THAN, MY HEART WOULD BE IN PEACE. the pain and the pain of love in deep desire and anxiety.. well pictured in a wonderful way. tony WHEN SORROWS WILL HAVE IT SLAIN

Pain woven through every word, a strong expression...10

I can relate to this poem on all levels. Really soul-touching.

NEVER FELT A WARM TOUCH BUT HARSH WORDS, USED TO STRAIN why so sad? very profound intense poem1

very emotive description..liked

A touching poem, an impressive one.

Nice piece of poetry, thanks for sharing. I think it could be better not to write your text in uppercase, because as I know that the site doesn't accept it in this way, so it could be removed. TEARS DROPPING ON THESE VERSES SOUND LIKE RAIN HITTING WINDOWPANE Very nice...

A strange emotion that can bring ecstasy or misery. Thanks for sharing, Musawir Peace