Saturday, June 4, 2005
Pain Comments
Rating: ★3.0
You’re causing me pain
You’re in my head all the time
It’s causing me strain
When can I call you mine?
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Melissa Barber
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7/31/2025 9:26:25 AM # 1.0.0
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM....THIS PIECE IS GOOD..IT WOULD BE VERY FINE IF YOU FOUND A REPLACEMENT LINE FOR''especially your behind'...Make no mistake...i'm no prude...the line just does not belong with the decorum of this serious-themed Poem...Otherwise, i love it...Bpttom line...It's your Poem...Your Call''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR