Sunday, January 10, 2010

Pain Comments

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This pain runs deep in my veins
Its cutting me like a razor blade
It mangles and rips me apart from the inside out
To know that something that was once good
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Darkness Falls
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Jazib Kamalvi 02 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Darkness. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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That was interesting. It took an unespected turn when you said it leaves you with nothing but a chance. I can relate with the pain, but you made it sound really inspiring.

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Darkness Falls

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