Saturday, August 8, 2009

Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

You hurt me deep
Your words were cold
Now it’s forever written in stone
Remembering the scene puts chills to my bones
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Heaven and Earth
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Angela Aparicio 04 November 2009

OMG! This poem reminds me of me because I've too been hurt deeply because of the one I love. In fact, I still feel pain within my heart but not as much as I have done before because I have to remind myself that I will fall in love again. (But will they of me? '

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Medusa Waves 08 August 2009

Wow-that was really really great! I loved it so much-the way you showed such rough emotion, Bravo! A true 10!

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Mari Velazco 08 August 2009

i enjoyed this poem u can really make me see your pain nice job=]

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