Friday, July 3, 2009

Pain Comments

Rating: 4.8

I close my eyes and try to think of a time when I was happy.
But nothing seems to work.
As my tears run down my face, I try not to think of the pain.
I can’t help it but all the bad memories flow back into my mind as soon as I close my eyes.
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Shawna Haley
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Saadat Tahir 11 July 2009

hi shawna superb poetry u captured the aura of pain and suffering so well...almost heart felt and heart wrenching....very nice cheers

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Christopher Flynn 03 July 2009

It is sometimes hard to see past the dark That shadows our lives in pain. Excellent poem that expresses the hoplessness and sorrow of a personal tragedy.

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Tyease Collins 03 July 2009

This is exactly how I feel right now. Thank you for completely writing my truths =] -Tyease

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Ashley Hall 03 July 2009

I understand <3 sending some love your way<33

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Ahtivah Lawton 03 July 2009

i understand what u mean girl! !

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