Tuesday, June 16, 2009

Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pain travels,
it hurts,
it seems like no one feels me,
or even hears me.
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jazzmen hankins
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Eyan Desir 17 June 2009

Good flow on this poem I felt the poem was a bit twisted 10s

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Cristy Upshaw 17 June 2009

you seem to go between pain and love. I guess what is one without the other? I have felt this way many times, being an emotional person, I feel more than some do. excellent write.

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