Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Pain! Comments

Rating: 4.5

Life's painful days pass on without respite;
Physical pains can be contained by poems;
Heart's wounds caused by words pain much
Due to tolerance to unsuitable dogmats long!
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Ramesh T A
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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2022

Time tests the stamina of person to bear all pains; But relief comes after the limit is stretched extreme! Still the world is for the survival of the fittest, seems......I value this precise expression a lot. A motivational poem. Top score!

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 November 2016

Painful life! ! Survival of the fittest. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Catrina Heart 18 February 2009

If the heart beats no longer in proper rhythm due to both physical and emotional pains How could one survive long If the physical body is not that strong? Even now the will wants to live long........ Just a share...you've got another wonderful write here sir....Thanks!

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Ramesh T A

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Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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