Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pain it hurts
Why must this be
The way it ends
Can it be
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Tobias Gray
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Tyease Collins 14 September 2009

my favorite part was: 'When I saw you I saw me' That was sooooo cute =] Ellie =]

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Ruby Heart 31 January 2009

nice poem! really captures the meaning

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Evaughn Gray 31 January 2009

i really like it.. it's short but it's very good.. your pain seems choppy and a run on.. it's a wonderful piece for a wonderful man, ..~Hazel G.E

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Tobias Gray

Tobias Gray

Honou, Germany
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